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©2006-2008 ~RetroHotline
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Submitted: November 24, 2006
File Size: 986 KB
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Resolution: 600×791
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Make: EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model: KODAK C330 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
Shutter Speed: 1/47 second
F Number: F/2.7
Focal Length: 6 mm
ISO Speed: 80
Date Picture Taken: Nov 24, 2006, 7:12:04 AM

Artist's Comments

this took me a whopping 4hours to do and i beleive i've improved over this. *confidence meter is getting higher*


NOTE: i tried to push my character back and show some depth by bringing her hands and foot folward.. i donno if it worked right.. but i'd appreciate comments as to what you like and dont' like about it. and possibly some tips XP
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~Akaryu-chan:iconAkaryu-chan: Nov 24, 2006, 7:49:23 PM
i like it, i'm no smarty pants manga artist so i can't give you any advice...TT~TT

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~RetroHotline:iconRetroHotline: Nov 24, 2006, 7:51:06 PM
hmmmm... well then what do you like about it? and what do u thinks wrong with it? i donno. anyhelp is good :)

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I said my goal is to be cigarettes to you,
it might sound dangerous but that just means it's worth it.
~Akaryu-chan:iconAkaryu-chan: Nov 24, 2006, 8:05:03 PM
well...it might help to have some sort of background to define the light,where its coming from at least. maybe a few more details like shadows...i especialy like her expersion,she looks like she'll run you over...she reminds me of a friend in stiner...she creeped the fuck out of me, but she was nice (to a point)...KEEP WORKING ON IT!!!!

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Bombing for peace is like raping for virginity, no matter how much you'd like to think it could work, it never will.
~RetroHotline:iconRetroHotline: Nov 24, 2006, 8:27:05 PM
hahaha, thanks! but yea, i donno i just kinda colored it as i went along w/o thinking about light (bad grace! *smacks face*) so yea, i donno if i could fix it but maybe i'll do something in the background.. thanks for the help :D

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I said my goal is to be cigarettes to you,
it might sound dangerous but that just means it's worth it.
~Akaryu-chan:iconAkaryu-chan: Nov 24, 2006, 10:00:18 PM
aww...don't smack your self,it leaves unsightly tomatos splotches.

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Bombing for peace is like raping for virginity, no matter how much you'd like to think it could work, it never will.
~Akaryu-chan:iconAkaryu-chan: Nov 24, 2006, 10:01:12 PM
aww...don't smack your self,it leaves unsightly tomatos splotches!

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Bombing for peace is like raping for virginity, no matter how much you'd like to think it could work, it never will.
~Iluvrocket:iconIluvrocket: Nov 25, 2006, 5:14:50 AM
I absolutlely love it :clap: :spin: < (this is Jordan Buzzy!) XDDD You're right, you did improve!

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piss off, fascists!
~RetroHotline:iconRetroHotline: Nov 25, 2006, 8:43:17 AM Mood: Hope
yay! thank you! :dance: i think the left leg is kinda funky (like i donno how to explain it) but i'm working on improvment so the next piece will be better (hopefu;;y)

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I said my goal is to be cigarettes to you,
it might sound dangerous but that just means it's worth it.